Member Profile: Ayame Okita
Name: Ayame Okita
Status: Author
Join Date: 03/19/08
Last Logged In: 08/10/08
Skin: Shinigami_Blue
Contact: iLuvEdwardMasen Yahoo IM midnight.sun17
About Contacting: You may contact me anyway that is best for you. I am on Gaia almost everyday same with DeviantArt. I also check my mail 4 to 5 times a week. But AOL is not something I am on very much at all.
If you choose to contact me, please remember to give me your name here on LunaEscence. I will contact you right away. Please leave details of what exactly you would like me to look at (if that is your reason for contacting). Other wise I will just randomly talk to you.

Not much for this... Never really is.
Oh and please excuse the awfulness of my writings....

You know what... I don\'t actually care what order these two are in... depending on who you are you could like it both ways... Me, I am one of those people... Since the two are interchangeable To my I will either refer to them as either KuroFai, it\'s catchy, of KuroFaiKuro (my friend came up with that one)

~Stand ((ZackCloud)) -- In Progress
~Life Changing Dream ((KuroFaiKuro)) -- On Hold
~Kingdom Yaoi ((Many Pairings)) -- In Progress


I have been undating my stuff on what is currently three different sites. This is hard for me to do with the amount of time I have. So with that, since I have the fewest number of well ANYTHING here I will no longer be uploading here. But over the summer I will always come back and post what has been missed during the school year.
If you are a reader of mine (yeah right) you can either click on the link to my deviantART account or the link for my \"website\" which is my page on
Beta Reader Profile
Will check for:
  • Spelling
  • Punctuation
  • Grammar
  • Characterization
  • Plot
  • Canon Elements
  • Overall Impression
  • Other
Status: Open
About my services: I have been editing stories for years! For a while I was a main editor on a forum called Future Writers (no one has probably heard of it, but it was a wonderful site). Now here I am, after the site disbanded, ready to edit yours.
I may stink, badly, at spelling but thank God that I have a dictionary program installed! (Multiple languages)
I can help with wording (loves reworking things), and ideas. Will suggest things not actually change them.
Basically I am an all around editor.
Will read anime/manga fanfics as well as random ones from other things. I just might get through the manga ones faster. EXCLUDING anything from the Twilight series! I will get through those fast.
Will not read: I WILL read most things. I actually can't think of much that I won't (loves incest and yaoi, yuri is fine too) ^.^
Wait I just thought of something.
I WILL NOT READ and of that characterXreader crap. (yes I called it crap) I just cannot really get into it, so I will not be accepting any of these.
Also I will not read mpreg, I love yaoi yes.. but that makes no sense to me. I just think it ruins things.
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