|Member Profile: Kyuun
Join Date: 06/04/12
Last Logged In: 05/26/16
"Let the space between where you want to be and where you are now inspire you."
Be safe, happy, and have a good day!
Will check for:
- Canon Elements
- Overall Impression
About my services: I'll be frank. I'm in love with OCs/Reader Inserts. That doesn't mean your story absolutely has to include one though. However, if you do have a story with an OC you'd like me to beta-read, I will point out everything. If I like him/her/it, then I'll say I will. If your OC has Mary-Sue tendencies, then I'll point that out too. I'll mostly focus on your characters, your literary language, and of course - the story. Especially the story. What I expect from people is pretty high.
I'll analyze your story thoroughly. Incorrect grammar, spelling, words that could be changed for more better ones... I'll do my best to find them. If your story is too cheesy, or too cliche, or your characters are too perfect, I'll tell you (as stated above). I'm pretty good at stories, and making them more original, but that's your job, so I'll leave you little hints. I'll also look for incorrect tense use - as in somehow swapping from present tense to past tense.
It's my job as a beta-reader to make you a better writer, so I'll try my best to make you improve your skills.
It's fun to help other authors with their works - but because of my schedule, I'm pretty busy. I'll be on whenever I can. However, everyone makes mistakes. It's what makes us human. So don't go on a rage if I miss out on a word or two. It's still your story, so make sure you read it before uploading it.
I love Romance/Comedy and Reader Inserts + OC. I'll take any really, but these types of fanfiction are what I like to read best.
Will not read: Any categories (Anime/Manga, Games etc) I haven't mentioned. Of course, if you want, you can message me and hey, maybe I'll watch an anime or read a book for you (if it's available).