LunaescenceLunaescence
 
Member Profile: Grey
Name: Grey
Alias: Nataliya
Status: Author
 
 
Join Date: 12/01/11
Last Logged In: 01/27/12
Skin: Shuriken
 
 
Contact:
Links: _DA simlish
A traveller, author, and one dashing colour. I used to be known as Rukaluff and ZeroGravityPiano on fanfiction.net but...I personally think that I\'ve greatly improved.
 
Beta Reader Profile
Will check for:
  • Spelling
  • Punctuation
  • Grammar
  • Characterization
  • Plot
  • Canon Elements
  • Overall Impression
Status: Open
About my services: My strengths would include eliminating OOC, especially in OC stories. If the canon dictates that a character would act in one way and not in another, then I'll hold you up to that unless you give a significant/logical reason (ie: Bill was undercover, so, instead of being a kind and loving father, he has to masquerade as a chain-smoking, foul mouthed man to get into the local Mafia in order to collect evidence that would send said Mafia's major players to jail for something nasty.) As long as the characters act similarly to how they would in canon, I'm one happy-pappy.

For original stories, I prefer focusing on description and scenery.

My weaknesses would be not identifying purple prose or, if I do, I think of it as "good writing"/"good description". I'm a major violator of this cardinal rule myself, culminating to the point where I will not post something if it doesn't contain enough adjectives. For example, I can't honestly use the word "adjectives" anywhere else in this section because I've already used it once already...
Will not read: In fanfiction, I don't really enjoy AU (Alternate Universe) stories. Sorry but I prefer to remain within the canon universe, unless that AU you're writing in is actually possible within canon. (ie: you could write a story about the alternate world within one of those fiddly comic books that often spout alternate universes). However, if your AU is interesting enough, I'll give it a shot. I absolutely, positively WILL NOT BETA HIGH SCHOOL AUs! End of story.

In original stories, I'm not a big fan of the romance-centric plots but I'm willing to give them a shot if you can convince me!
Page Footer
This website is solely for non-profit entertainment purposes only. No profits are being made from this website whatsoever. All fan fiction represented in this archive are © their respective owners and/or authors. All original works are © their respective authors. No reproduction of the written works in this archive is permitted without prior consent of their respective authors. All Rights Reserved. Icons used on this site are from famfamfam.com. Protected by Spam Poison Bleach, Ichigo are © Studio Pierrot, TV Tokyo, Dentsu, and Tite Kubo.